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Great vlog, like always, Ava! The only thing I would add about the stakes is to make them personal for the protagonist too. Saving the world is a noble goal, but saving the world AND the five-year-old orphaned neighbor boy who always shared his M&Ms brings heart into it.
Jan 27, 2015, 9:41:41 AM
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