cleaning up some text on websockets page

mattmakai · mattmakai · commit c685e8095e39 · 2015-01-25T14:27:12.000-05:00
diff --git a/all.html b/all.html
@@ -4842,9 +4842,9 @@ <h2>Why use WebSockets?</h2>
 applications would implement long polling via frequent
 Asynchronous JavaScript and XML (AJAX) requests as shown in the below diagram. </p>
 <p><img src="theme/img/ajax-long-polling.png" width="100%" alt="Long polling via AJAX is incredibly inefficient for some applications." class="technical-diagram" /></p>
-<p>Server push, as shown in the below diagram, is more efficient and scalable 
-than long polling because the web browser does not have to constantly ask for 
-updates through a stream of AJAX requests.</p>
+<p>Server push is more efficient and scalable than long polling because the 
+web browser does not have to constantly ask for updates through a stream 
+of AJAX requests.</p>
 <p><img src="theme/img/websockets-flow.png" width="100%" alt="WebSockets are more efficient than long polling for server sent updates." class="technical-diagram" /></p>
 <p>The WebSockets approach for server pushed updates works well for certain
 categories of web applications such as chat room, which is why that's often
diff --git a/feeds/all.atom.xml b/feeds/all.atom.xml
@@ -1,2 +1,2 @@
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+<feed xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom"><title>Matt Makai</title><link href="http://www.fullstackpython.com/" rel="alternate"></link><link href="http://www.fullstackpython.com/feeds/all.atom.xml" rel="self"></link><id>http://www.fullstackpython.com/</id><updated>2015-01-25T14:27:01Z</updated></feed>
diff --git a/source/content/pages/12-next/1201-websockets.markdown b/source/content/pages/12-next/1201-websockets.markdown
@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@ Asynchronous JavaScript and XML (AJAX) requests as shown in the below diagram.
 
 <img src="theme/img/ajax-long-polling.png" width="100%" alt="Long polling via AJAX is incredibly inefficient for some applications." class="technical-diagram" />
 
-Server push, as shown in the below diagram, is more efficient and scalable 
-than long polling because the web browser does not have to constantly ask for 
-updates through a stream of AJAX requests.
+Server push is more efficient and scalable than long polling because the 
+web browser does not have to constantly ask for updates through a stream 
+of AJAX requests.
 
 <img src="theme/img/websockets-flow.png" width="100%" alt="WebSockets are more efficient than long polling for server sent updates." class="technical-diagram" />
 
diff --git a/websockets.html b/websockets.html
@@ -56,9 +56,9 @@ <h2>Why use WebSockets?</h2>
 applications would implement long polling via frequent
 Asynchronous JavaScript and XML (AJAX) requests as shown in the below diagram. </p>
 <p><img src="theme/img/ajax-long-polling.png" width="100%" alt="Long polling via AJAX is incredibly inefficient for some applications." class="technical-diagram" /></p>
-<p>Server push, as shown in the below diagram, is more efficient and scalable 
-than long polling because the web browser does not have to constantly ask for 
-updates through a stream of AJAX requests.</p>
+<p>Server push is more efficient and scalable than long polling because the 
+web browser does not have to constantly ask for updates through a stream 
+of AJAX requests.</p>
 <p><img src="theme/img/websockets-flow.png" width="100%" alt="WebSockets are more efficient than long polling for server sent updates." class="technical-diagram" /></p>
 <p>The WebSockets approach for server pushed updates works well for certain
 categories of web applications such as chat room, which is why that's often

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