working on web frameworks page

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@@ -53,13 +53,14 @@ <h1>Introduction</h1>
 you're currently trying to do. </p>
 <h3>Let's get started. What do you need to do right now?</h3>
                       <h1>Web frameworks</h1>
-<p>A web application framework is a code library that makes a developer's life
-easier when building reliable, scalable and maintainable web applications.</p>
+<p>A web framework is a code library that makes a developer's life easier when 
+building reliable, scalable and maintainable web applications.</p>
 <h2>Why are web frameworks necessary?</h2>
 <p>Web frameworks encapsulate what developers have learned over the past twenty
-years while building dynamic web applications. Frameworks make it easier
-to reuse code for common HTTP operations and to structure your code so that 
-it is maintainable.</p>
+years while programming sites and applications for the web. Frameworks make 
+it easier to reuse code for common HTTP operations and to structure projects 
+so developers with knowledge of the framework can more quickly build and
+maintain the application.</p>
 <h2>Common web framework functionality</h2>
 <p>Frameworks provide functionality in their code or through extensions to 
 perform common operations required to run web applications. These common 
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 # Web frameworks
-A web application framework is a code library that makes a developer's life
-easier when building reliable, scalable and maintainable web applications.
+A web framework is a code library that makes a developer's life easier when 
+building reliable, scalable and maintainable web applications.
 
 
 ## Why are web frameworks necessary?
 Web frameworks encapsulate what developers have learned over the past twenty
-years while building dynamic web applications. Frameworks make it easier
-to reuse code for common HTTP operations and to structure your code so that 
-it is maintainable.
+years while programming sites and applications for the web. Frameworks make 
+it easier to reuse code for common HTTP operations and to structure projects 
+so developers with knowledge of the framework can more quickly build and
+maintain the application.
 
 
 ## Common web framework functionality
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       <h1>Web frameworks</h1>
-<p>A web application framework is a code library that makes a developer's life
-easier when building reliable, scalable and maintainable web applications.</p>
+<p>A web framework is a code library that makes a developer's life easier when 
+building reliable, scalable and maintainable web applications.</p>
 <h2>Why are web frameworks necessary?</h2>
 <p>Web frameworks encapsulate what developers have learned over the past twenty
-years while building dynamic web applications. Frameworks make it easier
-to reuse code for common HTTP operations and to structure your code so that 
-it is maintainable.</p>
+years while programming sites and applications for the web. Frameworks make 
+it easier to reuse code for common HTTP operations and to structure projects 
+so developers with knowledge of the framework can more quickly build and
+maintain the application.</p>
 <h2>Common web framework functionality</h2>
 <p>Frameworks provide functionality in their code or through extensions to 
 perform common operations required to run web applications. These common 

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