fix typo on intro

mattmakai · mattmakai · commit 46c17044a456 · 2018-05-22T16:55:42.000-04:00
diff --git a/content/pages/01-introduction/00-introduction.markdown b/content/pages/01-introduction/00-introduction.markdown
@@ -10,15 +10,14 @@ meta: Full Stack Python provides plain language explanations for Python programm
 # Introduction
 You're knee deep in learning [Python](http://www.python.org/)
 programming. The syntax is starting to make sense. The first
-few "*ahh-ha*!" moments hit you as you are learn conditional
+few "*ahh-ha*!" moments hit you as you learn conditional
 statements, `for` loops and classes while playing around with the open 
 source libraries that make Python such an amazing language.
 
 Now you want to take your 
 [initial Python knowledge](/learning-programming.html) 
-and make something real, like an web application that's available on 
-the internet that you can show off or sell as a service to other people. 
-That's where 
+and make something real, like a web application to show
+off or sell as a service to customers. That's where 
 [Full Stack Python](https://www.fullstackpython.com/table-of-contents.html) 
 comes in. You've come to the right place to learn everything you 
 need to know to [create](/web-development.html), [deploy](/deployment.html) 
diff --git a/theme/templates/index.html b/theme/templates/index.html
@@ -14,19 +14,21 @@
 <div class="row">
  <div class="c8">
   <h1 style="font-size:26px">Build, Deploy and Operate Python Applications</h1>
-  <p>You're knee deep in learning the <a href="http://www.python.org/">Python</a>
-  programming language. The syntax is starting to make sense. The first
-  few "<em>ahh-ha</em>!" moments hit you as you learning conditional
-  statements, <code>for</code> loops and classes while playing around with the open 
-  source libraries that make Python such an amazing language.</p>
+  <p>You're knee deep in learning <a href="http://www.python.org/">Python</a>
+  programming. The syntax is starting to make sense. The first
+  few <em>ahh-ha!</em> moments hit you as you learn to use 
+  conditional statements, <code>for</code> loops and classes while 
+  coding with the open source libraries that make Python such an 
+  amazing language.</p>
   <p>Now you want to take your
   <a href="/learning-programming.html">initial Python knowledge</a>
-  and make something real, like an application that's available on the web that
-  you can show off or sell as a service to other people. That's where Full
-  Stack Python comes in. You've come to the right place to learn everything you
+  and make something real, like a web application to show off to friends or 
+  sell as a service to customers. That's where 
+  <a href="https://www.fullstackpython.com/table-of-contents.html">Full Stack Python</a> 
+  comes in. You have come to the right place to learn everything you
   need to <a href="/web-development.html">create</a>, 
   <a href="/deployment.html">deploy</a> and <a href="/devops.html">operate</a> 
-  production Python web applications.</p>
+  Python-powered applications.</p>
   <p>This guide branches out on topic because your learning
   requirements depend on what you're working on. Select one
   of the buttons below or check out the full
