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bpo-34682: Wording and grammatical changes to the doc(https://docs.python.org/3) - #13120

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Other than my comments, this looks good. Thanks!

.. method:: generator.__next__()

Starts the execution of a generator function or resumes it at the last
executed yield expression. When a generator function is resumed with a

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I think the original "a" is correct here, although I realize there's some wiggle room.

Comment thread Doc/reference/expressions.rst Outdated
The operators :keyword:`is` and :keyword:`is not` test for object identity: ``x
is y`` is true if and only if *x* and *y* are the same object. Object identity
The operators :keyword:`is` and :keyword:`is not` test for object's identity: ``x
is y`` is true if and only if *x* and *y* are the same object. Object's identity

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And same here: "An object's identity ..."

Comment thread Doc/reference/expressions.rst Outdated

The operators :keyword:`is` and :keyword:`is not` test for object identity: ``x
is y`` is true if and only if *x* and *y* are the same object. Object identity
The operators :keyword:`is` and :keyword:`is not` test for object's identity: ``x

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I would make this "test for an object's identity" (adding "an").

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I have made the requested changes; please review again

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Looks good. Thanks!

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Thanks @divyag9 for the PR 🌮🎉.. I'm working now to backport this PR to: 3.7.
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GH-13279 is a backport of this pull request to the 3.7 branch.

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@divyag9 Congratulations on getting your PR merged! 🎉 🎉

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@divyag9 Congratulations on getting your PR merged! 🎉 🎉

Thanks Cheryl(@csabella)! Thanks for all your help

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