Skip to content

Commit 2e893c5

Browse files
fezcodefezcode
committed
content: consistency for the stories
1 parent d1ef0ff commit 2e893c5

File tree

5 files changed

+51
-67
lines changed

5 files changed

+51
-67
lines changed

‎public/stories/characters.piml‎

Lines changed: 30 additions & 30 deletions
Original file line numberDiff line numberDiff line change
@@ -1,37 +1,9 @@
11
(characters)
2-
> (character)
3-
(name) Niva DeRosa
4-
(role) Intelligence Officer
5-
(book) Volume I: The Streets of Thornus
6-
(description) A sewer worker's daughter who became an intelligence officer to give her father a better life. She uncovered the plot behind the Massacre of the Grenadiers but was ignored, leading to a tragedy that broke her.
7-
(status) Missing
8-
9-
> (character)
10-
(name) Donlane DeRosa
11-
(role) Sewer Worker / "The King"
12-
(book) Volume I: The Streets of Thornus
13-
(description) A giant of a man with a crown-shaped birthmark on his hand. He dedicated his life to the sewers of Thornus to raise his children. He died buying flowers in the City Market.
14-
(status) Deceased
15-
16-
> (character)
17-
(name) Granold Rolnifeld
18-
(role) Major / Military Officer
19-
(book) Volume I: The Streets of Thornus
20-
(description) A charismatic but arrogant military officer who dismissed Niva's warning about the City Market attack. He carries the weight of the massacre and Niva's disappearance.
21-
(status) Alive (Guilt-Ridden)
22-
23-
> (character)
24-
(name) Hewond Lynnia
25-
(role) Mayor of Thornus
26-
(book) Volume I: The Streets of Thornus
27-
(description) The Mayor of Thornus who was assassinated during the Massacre of the Grenadiers.
28-
(status) Deceased
29-
302
> (character)
313
(name) Corrigan
324
(role) Private Investigator
335
(book) The Broken Path
34-
(description) A cynical detective who hunted his own shadow and found it. After the incident at the St. Marlowe, he is said to walk without a reflection—a hollow vessel haunting the streets of Thornus.
6+
(description) A cynical detective who hunted his own shadow and found it. After the incident at the St. Marlowe, he is said to walk without a reflection—a hollow vessel haunting the streets of Predymesh.
357
(status) Alive (Hollow / Shadowless)
368

379
> (character)
@@ -242,4 +214,32 @@
242214
(role) Extinct Civilization (Proxanians)
243215
(book) The Sanity Ward
244216
(description) A humanoid race that predates human colonization of Thornus. Their culture revolved around the 'Communion Rites' and the biological harvesting of Sansu Syrup. Their remnant psychic frequency, the 'Proxanian Echo', is harvested to power the RedLink.
245-
(status) Extinct (Harvested)
217+
(status) Extinct (Harvested)
218+
219+
> (character)
220+
(name) Niva DeRosa
221+
(role) Intelligence Officer
222+
(book) The Crown of the Sewer
223+
(description) A sewer worker's daughter who became an intelligence officer to give her father a better life. She uncovered the plot behind the Massacre of the Grenadiers but was ignored, leading to a tragedy that broke her.
224+
(status) Missing
225+
226+
> (character)
227+
(name) Donlane DeRosa
228+
(role) Sewer Worker / "The King"
229+
(book) The Crown of the Sewer
230+
(description) A giant of a man with a crown-shaped birthmark on his hand. He dedicated his life to the sewers of Thornus to raise his children. He died buying flowers in the City Market.
231+
(status) Deceased
232+
233+
> (character)
234+
(name) Granold Rolnifeld
235+
(role) Major / Military Officer
236+
(book) The Massacre of the Grenadiers
237+
(description) A charismatic but arrogant military officer who dismissed Niva's warning about the City Market attack. He carries the weight of the massacre and Niva's disappearance.
238+
(status) Alive (Guilt-Ridden)
239+
240+
> (character)
241+
(name) Hewond Lynnia
242+
(role) Mayor
243+
(book) The Massacre of the Grenadiers
244+
(description) The Mayor of Predymesh who was assassinated during the Massacre of the Grenadiers.
245+
(status) Deceased

‎public/stories/meta-items/items.piml‎

Lines changed: 1 addition & 1 deletion
Original file line numberDiff line numberDiff line change
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
22
> (item)
33
(name) Niva's Badge
44
(type) Insignia
5-
(book) Volume I: The Streets of Thornus
5+
(book) The Massacre of the Grenadiers
66
(description) An intelligence officer's badge, now stained with the blood of a sewer worker. It represents the failure of the system to protect those who built it.
77
(owner) Niva DeRosa (Abandoned)
88

‎public/stories/places.piml‎

Lines changed: 18 additions & 34 deletions
Original file line numberDiff line numberDiff line change
@@ -3,24 +3,24 @@
33
(name) Military Academy of Thornus
44
(type) Academy
55
(category) Institutions
6-
(book) Volume I: The Streets of Thornus
6+
(book) The Crown of the Sewer
77
(description) A rigid institution where the elite of Thornus are trained. It is where Niva DeRosa met Granold Rolnifeld and learned the hard truths of class and betrayal.
88
(status) Active
99

1010
> (place)
1111
(name) Road of Lion
1212
(type) Avenue
1313
(category) Locations
14-
(book) Volume I: The Streets of Thornus
14+
(book) The Massacre of the Grenadiers
1515
(description) The ceremonial avenue of Thornus, often used for parades. It was the target of a diversionary bomb threat by Cytrox.
1616
(status) Active
1717

1818
> (place)
1919
(name) City Market
2020
(type) Marketplace
2121
(category) Locations
22-
(book) Volume I: The Streets of Thornus
23-
(description) The bustling heart of Thornus commerce. It became the site of the Massacre of the Grenadiers, where Mayor Lynnia and 13 civilians, including Donlane DeRosa, were killed.
22+
(book) The Massacre of the Grenadiers
23+
(description) The bustling heart of Predymesh commerce. It became the site of the Massacre of the Grenadiers, where Mayor Lynnia and 13 civilians, including Donlane DeRosa, were killed.
2424
(status) Active (Scarred)
2525

2626
> (place)
@@ -183,34 +183,18 @@
183183
(description) A city of celebrities, glamour, and superficiality. It is the heart of the entertainment industry and filled with a glamorous lifestyle.
184184
(status) Active
185185

186-
> (place)
187-
188-
(name) Fredsound Dream Studios
189-
190-
(type) Production Studio
191-
192-
(category) Establishments
193-
194-
(book) The Fredsound Legacy
195-
196-
(description) The most prestigious and successful movie studio in Hamitonis, managed by Rainhold Fredsound.
197-
198-
(status) Active
199-
200-
201-
202-
> (place)
203-
204-
(name) Proxan Mountain
205-
206-
(type) Geographical Landmark
207-
208-
(category) Locations
209-
210-
(book) The Sanity Ward
211-
212-
(description) The ancestral home of the Children of the Mountain. A towering, desolate peak containing pressurized pockets of Sansu Syrup. It is currently a restricted military excavation site.
213-
214-
(status) Restricted
186+
> (place)
187+
(name) Fredsound Dream Studios
188+
(type) Production Studio
189+
(category) Establishments
190+
(book) The Fredsound Legacy
191+
(description) The most prestigious and successful movie studio in Hamitonis, managed by Rainhold Fredsound.
192+
(status) Active
215193

216-
194+
> (place)
195+
(name) Proxan Mountain
196+
(type) Geographical Landmark
197+
(category) Locations
198+
(book) The Sanity Ward
199+
(description) The ancestral home of the Children of the Mountain. A towering, desolate peak containing pressurized pockets of Sansu Syrup. It is currently a restricted military excavation site.
200+
(status) Restricted

‎public/stories/vol-3-redlink/the-architecture-of-ghosts/en/ruby-circuitry.txt‎

Lines changed: 1 addition & 1 deletion
Original file line numberDiff line numberDiff line change
@@ -8,4 +8,4 @@ This is the final piece of the bridge. When injected into a "Rose-Marked" subjec
88

99
The **RedLink** occurs when the Syrup allows the **Proxanian Echo** to finally reach the **Proxanian Seed**. The antenna finally has its signal. The human mind is finally bypassed.
1010

11-
Twelve units, linked by a river of liquid ruby light, no longer dreaming, no longer human. They are a single, multi-core biological engine, running an ancient civilization's ghost-code. The Trinity is complete. The silence is over. And the mountain has finally found a way to walk through the streets of Thornus.
11+
Twelve units, linked by a river of liquid ruby light, no longer dreaming, no longer human. They are a single, multi-core biological engine, running an ancient civilization's ghost-code. The Trinity is complete. The silence is over. And the mountain has finally found a way to walk through the streets of Predymesh.

‎public/stories/vol-3-redlink/the-architecture-of-ghosts/tr/yakut-devreler.txt‎

Lines changed: 1 addition & 1 deletion
Original file line numberDiff line numberDiff line change
@@ -8,4 +8,4 @@ Bu, köprünün son parçasıdır. "Gül-İşaretli" bir deneğe enjekte edildi
88

99
**RedLink**, Şurup **Proxanian Yankısı**'nın nihayet **Proxanian Tohumu**'na ulaşmasına izin verdiğinde gerçekleşir. Anten sonunda sinyaline kavuşur. İnsan zihni sonunda devre dışı bırakılır.
1010

11-
Sıvı yakut ışığından bir nehirle birbirine bağlanmış on iki ünite; artık rüya görmüyorlar, artık insan değiller. Onlar, kadim bir medeniyetin hayalet kodunu çalıştıran tek bir, çok çekirdekli biyolojik motorlar. Üçleme tamamlandı. Sessizlik bitti. Ve dağ nihayet Thornus sokaklarında yürümenin bir yolunu buldu.
11+
Sıvı yakut ışığından bir nehirle birbirine bağlanmış on iki ünite; artık rüya görmüyorlar, artık insan değiller. Onlar, kadim bir medeniyetin hayalet kodunu çalıştıran tek bir, çok çekirdekli biyolojik motorlar. Üçleme tamamlandı. Sessizlik bitti. Ve dağ nihayet Predymesh sokaklarında yürümenin bir yolunu buldu.

0 commit comments

Comments
 (0)