tweaking intro wording

mattmakai · mattmakai · commit f6cf7ebce71c · 2014-01-30T13:31:14.000-05:00
diff --git a/feeds/all.atom.xml b/feeds/all.atom.xml
@@ -1,2 +1,2 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
-<feed xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom"><title>Matt Makai</title><link href="http://www.fullstackpython.com/" rel="alternate"></link><link href="http://www.fullstackpython.com/feeds/all.atom.xml" rel="self"></link><id>http://www.fullstackpython.com/</id><updated>2014-01-30T13:26:46Z</updated></feed>
+<feed xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom"><title>Matt Makai</title><link href="http://www.fullstackpython.com/" rel="alternate"></link><link href="http://www.fullstackpython.com/feeds/all.atom.xml" rel="self"></link><id>http://www.fullstackpython.com/</id><updated>2014-01-30T13:31:07Z</updated></feed>
diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ <h1>Introduction</h1>
 useful.</p>
 <p>This guide has a different focus from the above resources. Here I
 focus on explaining the way a Python <em>web application</em> stack works from
-server infrastructure through JavaScript execution on a user's browser.</p>
+server infrastructure to the JavaScript that executes on a user's browser.</p>
 <p>People learning Python generally have at least one of the three following
 goals:</p>
 <ol class="arabic simple">
diff --git a/introduction.html b/introduction.html
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ <h1>Introduction</h1>
 useful.</p>
 <p>This guide has a different focus from the above resources. Here I
 focus on explaining the way a Python <em>web application</em> stack works from
-server infrastructure through JavaScript execution on a user's browser.</p>
+server infrastructure to the JavaScript that executes on a user's browser.</p>
 <p>People learning Python generally have at least one of the three following
 goals:</p>
 <ol class="arabic simple">
diff --git a/source/content/pages/introduction.rst b/source/content/pages/introduction.rst
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ useful.
 
 This guide has a different focus from the above resources. Here I 
 focus on explaining the way a Python *web application* stack works from 
-server infrastructure through JavaScript execution on a user's browser.
+server infrastructure to the JavaScript that executes on a user's browser.
 
 People learning Python generally have at least one of the three following
 goals:

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