Copy update: [WD-16878] Update /secure-open-source and Meganav

Kxiru · Kxiru · commit 0d3203200268 · 2024-11-15T16:00:01.000Z
Signed-off-by: Nkeiruka &lt;nkeiruka.whenu@canonical.com&gt;
diff --git a/navigation.yaml b/navigation.yaml
@@ -512,8 +512,8 @@ solutions:
           url: /solutions/infrastructure
         - title: Managed IT services
           url: https://ubuntu.com/managed
-        - title: Secure open source
-          url: /solutions/secure-open-source
+        - title: Open source security
+          url: /solutions/open-source-security
 
     - title: Industries
       links:
diff --git a/redirects.yaml b/redirects.yaml
@@ -32,3 +32,4 @@ intellectual-property-policy/?: "https://ubuntu.com/legal/intellectual-property-
 enterprise-services/ubuntu-advantage?: "https://ubuntu.com/pro"
 enterprise-services?: "https://ubuntu.com/support"
 microcloud/roadshow?: "/microcloud"
+solutions/secure-open-source?: "/solutions/open-source-security"
diff --git a/templates/solutions/ai/infrastructure/index.html b/templates/solutions/ai/infrastructure/index.html
@@ -355,7 +355,7 @@ <h2>
         </p>
         <hr class="p-rule--muted" />
         <p>
-          <a href="/solutions/secure-open-source">Explore secure open source&nbsp;&rsaquo;</a>
+          <a href="/solutions/open-source-security">Explore open source security with Canonical&nbsp;&rsaquo;</a>
         </p>
       </div>
     </div>
diff --git a/templates/solutions/open-source-security/_form-open-source-security.html b/templates/solutions/open-source-security/_form-open-source-security.html
diff --git a/templates/solutions/open-source-security/index.html b/templates/solutions/open-source-security/index.html
@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@
   https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mrvhkrVjCCJE39h96CPG_b_ZHWVN0GHzZ_6TdoudeYs {%
   endblock meta_copydoc %}
 
-  {% block title %}Get secure open source from Canonical{% endblock %}
+  {% block title %}Get open source security from Canonical{% endblock %}
 
   {% block meta_description %}
-    Get a standard and secure open source supply chain from the publisher of Ubuntu. Ideal to stay secure and compliant with  high-performance apps, cloud infrastructure, and systems.
+    Standardize your open source supply chain with the publisher of Ubuntu. Ideal to stay compliant across your devices, apps, cloud infrastructure, and systems.
   {% endblock %}
 
   {% block body_class %}
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
         <div class="col">
           <h1>Secure your open source software supply chain</h1>
           <p>
-            Consume secure open source that's got the same set of guarantees across the stack, from the same vendor. Let us manage the CVEs, so you can unlock developer productivity and simplify your compliance efforts.
+            Consume open source that's got the same set of guarantees across the stack, from the same vendor. Let us manage the CVEs, so you can unlock developer productivity and simplify your compliance efforts.
           </p>
           <hr class="p-rule--muted" />
           <a class="p-button--positive"
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ <h2>Why Canonical?</h2>
             </li>
             <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">Get fixes for critical vulnerabilities in under 24 hours on average</li>
             <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">Make your compliance efforts faster and easier</li>
-            <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">Up to 12 years of security and support</li>
+            <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">Up to 12 years of security maintenance and support</li>
           </ul>
         </div>
       </div>
@@ -71,11 +71,11 @@ <h2>Simplify vulnerability management. Drive developer productivity.</h2>
                     allowfullscreen></iframe>
           </div>
           <p>
-            Open source offers the world's innovation in code. But ensuring you remain secure, compliant and auditable can be a challenge. 
+            Open source offers the world's innovation in code. But ensuring you remain compliant and auditable can be a challenge. 
           </p>
           <p>
             We maintain and apply timely security patches on <b>the vastest open source library.</b>
-            We then backport and test the fixes on all supported Ubuntu versions, making it very easy to stay up to date and secure. Our comprehensive vulnerability management offering is available through a single convenient subscription: <a href="https://ubuntu.com/pro">Ubuntu Pro</a>.
+            We then backport and test the fixes on all supported Ubuntu versions, making it very easy to stay up to date. Our comprehensive vulnerability management offering is available through a single convenient subscription: <a href="https://ubuntu.com/pro">Ubuntu Pro</a>.
           </p>
           <br />
           <hr class="p-rule--muted" />
@@ -91,15 +91,15 @@ <h2>Simplify vulnerability management. Drive developer productivity.</h2>
     <section class="p-section">
       <div class="row">
         <div class="p-section--shallow">
-          <h2>Stay secure across the compute spectrum</h2>
+          <h2>Security across the compute spectrum</h2>
         </div>
         <hr class="p-rule col-9 col-start-large-4 col-medium-6 u-hide--medium p-rule--muted" />
         <div class="col-3 col-start-large-4 col-medium-2">
           <h5>IoT and edge</h5>
         </div>
         <div class="p-section--shallow col-6 col-start-large-7 col-medium-4">
           <p>
-            Get 10 years of security maintenance to secure your software supply chain. Manage your embedded devices in a compliant and scalable way. Automation enables you to apply patches at scale, and easily manage and debug your devices.
+            Get 10 years of security maintenance for your software supply chain. Manage your embedded devices in a compliant and scalable way. Automation enables you to apply patches at scale, and easily manage and debug your devices.
           </p>
           <hr class="p-rule--muted" />
           <p>
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ <h5>Workstations</h5>
         </div>
         <div class="p-section--shallow col-6 col-start-large-7 col-medium-4">
           <p>
-            Manage Ubuntu workstations with <a href="https://ubuntu.com/landscape">Landscape</a> and get comprehensive security and compliance auditing. Integrate seamlessly into your Windows estate with support for Active Directory. Give your developers access to a secure open source software library through Ubuntu.
+            Manage Ubuntu workstations with <a href="https://ubuntu.com/landscape">Landscape</a> and get comprehensive security and compliance auditing. Integrate seamlessly into your Windows estate with support for Active Directory. Give your developers access to a trusted open source software library through Ubuntu.
           </p>
           <hr class="p-rule--muted" />
           <p>
@@ -121,11 +121,11 @@ <h5>Workstations</h5>
         </div>
         <hr class="p-rule col-9 col-start-large-4 col-medium-6 p-rule--muted" />
         <div class="col-3 col-start-large-4 col-medium-2">
-          <h5>Data centres</h5>
+          <h5>Data centers</h5>
         </div>
         <div class="p-section--shallow col-6 col-start-large-7 col-medium-4">
           <p>
-            Secure your enterprise data centre and all its open source components, from the OS to private cloud platforms like OpenStack and orchestration tools like Kubernetes. Perform hardening and auditing at scale, even in air-gapped environments.
+            Simplify compliance for your enterprise data center and all its open source components, from the OS to private cloud platforms like OpenStack and orchestration tools like Kubernetes. Perform hardening and auditing at scale, even in air-gapped environments.
           </p>
           <hr class="p-rule" />
           <p>
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ <h5>Public clouds</h5>
         </div>
         <div class="p-section--shallow col-6 col-start-large-7 col-medium-4">
           <p>
-            Consume secure open source from Canonical with Ubuntu Pro on public clouds. Access hardening and compliance standards like FIPS, DISA-STIG and others.
+            Consume compliant open source from Canonical with Ubuntu Pro on public clouds. Access hardening and compliance standards like FIPS, DISA-STIG and others.
           </p>
           <hr class="p-rule--muted" />
           <p>
@@ -152,11 +152,11 @@ <h5>Public clouds</h5>
       <div class="row--50-50 p-section--shallow">
         <hr class="p-rule" />
         <div class="col">
-          <h2>Pull all your software from a secure source</h2>
+          <h2>Pull all your software from a trusted source</h2>
         </div>
         <div class="col">
           <p>
-            Deb packages, containers, snaps and Canonical-maintained software operators &mdash; consume the packaging format of your choice in a secure way.
+            Deb packages, containers, snaps and Canonical-maintained software operators &mdash; consume the packaging format of your choice in a compliant way.
           </p>
         </div>
       </div>
@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ <h2>Meet your compliance requirements faster</h2>
           <p>Build your apps and systems on a stack that simplifies compliance.</p>
           <p>Ubuntu Pro includes automation tooling and packages for FIPS 140, CIS and DISA-STIG hardening.</p>
           <p>
-            Ubuntu also has an EAL2 certification recognised by EU members of SOGIS, a platform that harmonises security
+            Ubuntu also has an EAL2 certification recognised by EU members of SOGIS, a platform that harmonizes security
             certification across Europe.
           </p>
           <p>Meet the most rigorous standards:</p>
@@ -522,7 +522,7 @@ <h2>
       <div class="row--50-50">
         <div class="col">
           <h2>
-            Learn more about secure open source
+            Learn more about open source security
             <br class="u-hide--small" />
           </h2>
         </div>
@@ -563,8 +563,8 @@ <h3 class="p-heading--5">
     <script defer src="{{ versioned_static('js/modals.js') }}"></script>
 
     {% with %}
-      {% set returnURL = "https://canonical.com/solutions/secure-open-source#contact-form-success" %}
-      {% include "solutions/secure-open-source/_form-secure-open-source.html" %}
+      {% set returnURL = "https://canonical.com/solutions/open-source-security#contact-form-success" %}
+      {% include "solutions/open-source-security/_form-open-source-security.html" %}
     {% endwith %}
 
   {% endblock %}
