Merge pull request Code52#13 from shiftkey/master

shiftkey-tester · shiftkey-tester · commit a2b7a3a90783 · 2012-01-16T02:29:48.000-08:00
Peer Review Fail
diff --git a/_posts/2012-01-16-jibbr-review.md b/_posts/2012-01-16-jibbr-review.md
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-As we are getting to the end of this iteration, it is time to take stock of what we have:
+As we are getting to the end of this iteration, it is time to take stock of what we have achieved.
 
 ## What went well
 
-After being picked up by some influential tweeters, the Code52 room became the most popular room on JabbR - far surpassing our wildest expectations this far along. We also picked up some new contributors, and it was excellent to 
+After being picked up by some influential tweeters, the Code52 room became the most popular room on JabbR - far surpassing our wildest expectations this far along. We also picked up some new contributors, and it was excellent to have contributors in different timezones.
 
 So we currently have a collection of *sprockets* (components which interact with users in a chat room) and *announcers* (components which periodically execute tasks and notify the chat room when new things have occurred). Important features include:
 
