Updating intro for clarity and conciseness.

mattmakai · mattmakai · commit 0d57dddc408f · 2012-12-28T07:54:13.000-05:00
diff --git a/feeds/all.atom.xml b/feeds/all.atom.xml
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+<feed xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom"><title>Matt Makai</title><link href="http://www.fullstackpython.com/" rel="alternate"></link><link href="http://www.fullstackpython.com/feeds/all.atom.xml" rel="self"></link><id>http://www.fullstackpython.com/</id><updated>2012-12-28T07:53:45Z</updated></feed>
diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
@@ -69,11 +69,10 @@ <h1>Introduction</h1>
 background, I wrote a
 <a class="reference external" href="http://www.mattmakai.com/learning-python-for-non-developers.html">Learning Python</a>
 blog post you may find useful.</p>
-<p>This guide has a different focus from the above resources. This site
-describes the myriad ways of setting up a Python <em>web application</em>
-stack from a &quot;bare metal&quot; server, virtual private server (VPS), Amazon Web
-Services (AWS) instance, or Platform-as-a-Service (PaaS) provider up
-through the JavaScript running on users' browsers on your website.</p>
+<p>This guide has a different focus from the above resources. Here I
+focus on explaining several ways of setting up a Python <em>web application</em>
+stack from server infrastructure through JavaScript execution on a user's
+browser.</p>
 <div class="section" id="about-the-author">
 <h2>About the Author</h2>
 <p>I'm <a class="reference external" href="http://www.mattmakai.com/">Matt Makai</a> and I solve problems by
diff --git a/pages/introduction.html b/pages/introduction.html
@@ -55,11 +55,10 @@ <h1>Introduction</h1>
 background, I wrote a
 <a class="reference external" href="http://www.mattmakai.com/learning-python-for-non-developers.html">Learning Python</a>
 blog post you may find useful.</p>
-<p>This guide has a different focus from the above resources. This site
-describes the myriad ways of setting up a Python <em>web application</em>
-stack from a &quot;bare metal&quot; server, virtual private server (VPS), Amazon Web
-Services (AWS) instance, or Platform-as-a-Service (PaaS) provider up
-through the JavaScript running on users' browsers on your website.</p>
+<p>This guide has a different focus from the above resources. Here I
+focus on explaining several ways of setting up a Python <em>web application</em>
+stack from server infrastructure through JavaScript execution on a user's
+browser.</p>
 <div class="section" id="about-the-author">
 <h2>About the Author</h2>
 <p>I'm <a class="reference external" href="http://www.mattmakai.com/">Matt Makai</a> and I solve problems by
diff --git a/source/content/pages/introduction.rst b/source/content/pages/introduction.rst
@@ -17,11 +17,10 @@ background, I wrote a
 `Learning Python <http://www.mattmakai.com/learning-python-for-non-developers.html>`_ 
 blog post you may find useful.
     
-This guide has a different focus from the above resources. This site 
-describes the myriad ways of setting up a Python *web application*
-stack from a "bare metal" server, virtual private server (VPS), Amazon Web 
-Services (AWS) instance, or Platform-as-a-Service (PaaS) provider up 
-through the JavaScript running on users' browsers on your website.
+This guide has a different focus from the above resources. Here I 
+focus on explaining several ways of setting up a Python *web application*
+stack from server infrastructure through JavaScript execution on a user's
+browser.
 
 About the Author
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